As the wind whistled past my ear
I looked in the distance
And stared at the figure
That I thought it went out of existence
But now I realise
As I gazed at its eyes
I took a step back
And jumped back in the car
Then drove silently away
Without even knowing
That it jumped in the back
And came home with me
Wow - you have me thinking now Trinity about what you are talking about. I'm having to read this over a few times to try and work it out. I feel like I'm reading a riddle and now I want to solve it! Well done!
ReplyDeleteMalo e Lelei, Trinity!
ReplyDeleteYou have an awesome Poem there. I really like how you used these juicy words to write your Poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work!
Petesa! :)
Malo e Lelei, Trinity!
ReplyDeletei just want to say you have an awesome Poem there. I wanted to comment on this story is because, when i finished reading your story it was really interesting. And i have to read this story and like it is making me telling you what it means like the book "Leap". But i just want to say you did a lovely poem and keep up the good work.From Lini